Shatterrealm

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Hannah Rose Williams 18th Sep 2016 edit delete

Sorry I haven't been commenting on your comics much lately. The husbeast and I just moved 1,000 miles just so we could feel a little closer to Mo! Things are mostly settled now, but we were pretty busy for a week there. I'll try to get back on track with you guys.

Hannah Rose Williams 19th Sep 2016 edit delete

Panel two is a flashback, if that isn't clear. Is that not clear? Ya gotta tell me if it's not clear. I don't know what I'm doing.

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jerrie 19th Sep 2016 edit delete reply

you moved? Hope you and your husband are doing well in your new place

KarToon12 19th Sep 2016 edit delete reply

Good luck on the move! Hope you have a smooth transition! :)

Z74 20th Sep 2016 edit delete reply

Nice page! May be cloud borders like thought balloons or monochrome on flash backs would make it more obvious

mladshiy 20th Sep 2016 edit delete reply

I didnt got confused about the flashback panel, but Z74's idea might work great too!

Hannah Rose Williams 20th Sep 2016 edit delete reply

Yeah in the future I think I will try to make the color faded or something. For whatever reason I cannot get away from EYEBLEED COLOR in my art. :P :)

Patrucca (Guest) 15th Jan 2017 edit delete reply

Beautifully done page. I see a lot of growth in this page from many of your past pages.

The flashback might be more obvious if you made the guttering around that panel black (instead of white like the rest)or if you tinted flashback panels (i.e. make 'em B&W). **shrug** Just a thought.

BTW, I love ALL of your Shatterrealm series. :D And Cam is still my fav!

Hannah Rose Williams 25th Aug 2017 edit delete reply

This comment is best comment.
Thanks for the critique!