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Hannah Rose Williams
Sorry I haven't been commenting on your comics much lately. The husbeast and I just moved 1,000 miles just so we could feel a little closer to Mo! Things are mostly settled now, but we were pretty busy for a week there. I'll try to get back on track with you guys.
Hannah Rose Williams
Panel two is a flashback, if that isn't clear. Is that not clear? Ya gotta tell me if it's not clear. I don't know what I'm doing.

User comments:
jerrie edit delete reply
you moved? Hope you and your husband are doing well in your new place
KarToon12 edit delete reply
Good luck on the move! Hope you have a smooth transition! :)
Z74 edit delete reply
Nice page! May be cloud borders like thought balloons or monochrome on flash backs would make it more obvious
mladshiy edit delete reply
I didnt got confused about the flashback panel, but Z74's idea might work great too!
Hannah Rose Williams
Yeah in the future I think I will try to make the color faded or something. For whatever reason I cannot get away from EYEBLEED COLOR in my art. :P :)
Patrucca (Guest) edit delete reply
Beautifully done page. I see a lot of growth in this page from many of your past pages.

The flashback might be more obvious if you made the guttering around that panel black (instead of white like the rest)or if you tinted flashback panels (i.e. make 'em B&W). **shrug** Just a thought.

BTW, I love ALL of your Shatterrealm series. :D And Cam is still my fav!
Hannah Rose Williams
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Thanks for the critique!